Thank you so much for such a thoughtful and detailed review — genuinely made my day reading this!
You're totally right about the rough English patches (especially around the water-serving options), the translation is machine-translated for this prototype build and we're aware it needs polishing — really appreciate you flagging the specific spot.
The "too short" feedback is very fair and something we heard a lot. We're seriously considering an extended version with more time with each character, so hearing that you'd pick it up if it happens means a lot. Thank you again, and I hope to have more to share soon! 🙏