I'm guessing that this is translated right?... "Come in properly, you're letting the road in." I'm sorry the what?
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partially because im not a native english speaker, partially because this wasnt a very well planned project and went through a few dozen big changes in story, partially cus first iterations of dialogue were almost fully ai written, its got a bit of an absolute mess of a dialogue even after a lot of manual rewriting, future stuff is a lot more planned so it shouldnt have such issues, Writing has always been and still is its weakest point by far and Ive spent a ton more time fixing stuff than I wouldve if I knew how to do it properly in the first place.
Ill fix that one up and go through another skim to try to find others, I prioritized main characters when rewriting so hopefully those have a better standard.
Thanks for the feedback.
I take no offense to it, it can hurt a bit but not because of what you said, more so because its true, dont worry ive gotten a lot worse and I appreciate a lot any feedback people can bring, since I actually want to continue improving this (you wouldnt believe how bad first version was), if youve got any other please let me know, and thank you.