Positives:
I like the maze being the central part of the game. Exploring and getting your bearings first is a clever way to use Twine's mechanics.
The style was also very nice. Having the sliding and ominous red screen show up after hurling myself off the edge was a neat touch. Also, the secret monster killing you if you run around repeatedly is fun.
Negatives.
It would have been nice if there was a reset button. Just good for convenience.
I did find an error when playing during the jump off the edge ending. Says the text color isn't attached to a hook.