Awesome. I'm going to try to put my review under spoilers so I can write freely.
I think this is a really cool concept for a fangame. It plays off the idea that Angel, and Angel's artwork as a proxy, have this inimitable quality to them that attracts a certain type of reclusive, lonely, maladjusted person. It happened to Lee. It happens to Jay. And then it enables Ley to take advantage of that person.
Ley is a fun character. There should be more deranged they/thems
Your art is always a delight, of course. I find it very stylistically appealing.
And I think you did an amazing job with the sound design. Both the music and the ambient sounds you chose were perfect for the game's mood. I was impressed.
I have a few questions, such as why are there so many textiles described as "wet." But that is the thrill of the mystery genre.
It's an honor to have a visual novel made that plays off my visual novel. I'm happy the ideas from something I made could give you ideas to create something new and original and unique yourself. I felt touched going through it. Thank you.