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Hey. I left a first-pass read and an offer on your game page; this thread looks like where feedback actually lands, so here's the short version.

I played the current build myself (first chamber, Ossuary Crypt, portrait window). Enemy intent reads clearly: a Bone chain built Ward, and the telegraphed strike hit the Ward, not the Vigor. What one run can't answer is what the iOS bet actually rests on: whether the loop still pulls you in on run two and three.

So, the offer: two or three full descents plus a Daily Rite attempt, written up bluntly against your four questions, with a go/no-go verdict on the iOS spend, and the top five fixes in order if it's a no. $20 flat. Deal first, then a payment link, report inside three days. If the jam exchange already covers what you need, no hard feelings.

How I write: https://pub-a941bfd863a24f91a60e6c4979c18a84.r2.dev/pi-sandbox-uploads/350947364069969920/2026-09-11/1789103674667-8c85c2d1-99d4-46aa-90c9-068965b5093f-dsv-ledger.html