Yeah, your adventure is really cool. I like the idea of the toungeless and mystery of the adventure. Would definitely like to see the expanded version of this.
Overally, I feel the same way with mine. Happy with the overall product, but can see where I needed to add or revise things. I pretty much made the adventure a bit more clear by relocating some information to different parts of the adventure. I think had it not been for the livestream and the small tidbit where the entire randomization aspect of my adventure was missed, I wouldn't have gone back to see how I could revise the adventure.