Yo! This is a great write up of feedback! Much appreciated. Funnily enough, what’s seen in the demo here (particular plot-wise) has actually been very much overhauled, or at least re-framed to add a lot more weight to both of the choices in Chapter 1. So it sort of pains me I cannot share this quite yet. (Our latest update was mainly to polish up the existing experience from the original Kickstarter Demo from back in February. Gameplay, performance, other platforms and general improving what was already there being the central focus, while narrative & significant overhauls to the entire game are currently brewing…)
Dialogue for Brassfist has actually been reworked to be more morally ambiguous, as well as giving both him and Schroeder more time in the spotlight for greater arcs throughout the first chapter. Long term effects regarding your choices were admittedly not able to be shown off in just the demo, (that’s something that’ll only be shown in-full throughout the whole game) but they’ll definitely be fleshed out much more in the future chapters… as well as the shop.
Many more things I am excited to share in the future, that will hopefully address each point here. Really great to have it all laid out in full to review, and I appreciate you taking the time to send this in. Thanks!