Incredible well written story. Hitting all the marks.
The mindbreak mechanic is a bit tedious. maybe remove the timer and add more filling making it harder to find the relevant line depending on the (timer) choice.
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Hey, I just saw this. I don't often check the comments here as I don't usually get them. Thank you so much for your kind review. The mindbreak has had mixed opinions, for sure. I might release a version that omits, but I'm proud of what I tried to do.
Thank you for being a reader! It means so much to me.
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