Man, the voice in the first track was totally unexpected! I think you can humanize the plucked strings a little bit to make it sound a tad more realistic. Totally loved the way the instruments were mixed. The general feeling was astonishing. I only feel some weird harmonies at around 1:41, some major/minor chords inconsistency that doesn't ruin the experience but I usually pay attention to how it is used because at times it works, at times it does not.
The Long Trek was such an experience, I felt lost in an empty space, staring at the stars in the middle of the night.
I needed more hahahaha
Very good job!
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Thanks! Also I'm guessing you mean the voice in the second track. The comment about the harmony is totally fair. It is a mix of major and minor diatonic chords. I'm guessing the interplay between that didn't work for you as well. I also could have added a bit more automation on the plucked strings for sure. I would have made a 3rd track but just didn't have the time to unfortunately (it would've been an overworld biome theme). Appreciate the feedback and I'm glad you vibed with both! I loved your submission as well. You had some interesting harmonic choices.