Right now I'm polishing dialogue, it's not gonna have a 100% consistent story or be withouth some plot holes but it should be a lot more understandable and a decent enough story
A part of the rewrite is giving the gym a reason to exist apart from the normal requirements.
Tailor, mink and others are meant as secondary quests for you to entertain yourself while working towards Chad, and Pearl was soriginallt meant to be finished in part 2 but decided to drop the whole thing here, she will have a continuation there tho, thank you for the feedback and appreciate it.