Congratulations for your entry!
This music is very close to what I'd have imagined to hear first considering the theme. Very ancient and epic sounding.
The whole composition feels kinda complex but very easy to listen to. I love how you managed to use dissonances not going towards the root. Every single layer helps bringing a sense of solemnity and hyped everything up. The dynamics are quite spot on. You can easily understand when something's about to change and grow. The themes were quite coherent to each other and you managed to blend them all together very well.
The only downside I'd have to point out though is that both tracks lack a sense of depth, space-wise. I'd at least add some reverb. You can feel this music as such a deep soul but it doesn't sound as majestic as it could.
Very good job, I've enjoyed it all!