So great! Really love that you can tell that there's thought going into the writing so as not to be... cookie-cutter, as it were. I've played a LOT of demos, cog, CYOA, etc. The ones that always stand out to me have their own distinctive writing style, especially when they write dialogue like real people with a small fantastical exaggeration. I also like the general idea; it's not very common for an interactive fiction author to lay down the law and say, "Yeah, you were with this person; deal with it or don't play my game," and I just love it! Keep up the good work!