Congratulations, Drizlikh!
As a listener, I had an interesting experience. It evoked a sense of nostalgia and really intrigued me about what was coming next.
As a musician, I really liked the way the music seems to tell a story. The instrumentation was excellent! However, I felt the string writing sounded a bit too raw. Also, the voicing sounded cluttered. If those aspects were refined—and combined with a good mix—the result would be even better!
In any case, it was great to hear your creation ;)