Some mistakes I found are: "Chawl out" i think should be "Crawl out". When she offers you the drink I think would be better to add "it" to "hope you liked". It's "ingredients" and not "ingridients". It's "don't want to try it" or "refuse to eat it/drink it". Last thing , when u want to "it is" or "i am" etc.. the correct contracted forms are "it's" and "I'm" etc..
I don't think if i found them all, try using https://context.reverso.net/ , it gives u the correct way to say something based on the context, it helped me so many times.
I hope i helped u UwU