Ruined my own experience at the very start when I realised that there was no character limit on the player's name. My second playthrough went a lot smoother.
Ren'py games are super dependant on their variety of choices and ending, really good job on managing to keep them both varied and concise. I would have prefered a more detailed epilogue than an HTTP error for all of them but I understand that time was short.
Pretty cool story all around. The way the father looks like John Arbuckle is definitely a plus.