I loved the story concept. It was really well put together and the use of breathing helped a lot with the immersion. I would love to see the concept on a larger scale. So far it was really fun and very well made. I loved the UI and the little quest tracker as I played while I was working and had to multitask. This enabled me to be able to find where I left off and resume.
Overall, I would love to see the game done on a larger scale. Detective style games with a monster are a very untapped horror genre to me. I feel like I haven't gotten enough of a chance to play more like this.
I would have loved to see the monster form of the enemy.
The game environment reminded me of Desolate or Metro