Thank you for listening and providing feedback! I appreciate the comment about the multiple vocal lines; I agree that portion didn't necessarily achieve the clarity or resonance I was looking for, and I definitely think cutting back on the layering would help.
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Listening to your track again just now: you might be able to pull it off with just mercyless application of EQ - basically modifying the sounds of the individual voices by almost cutting out areas in the spectrum, that the other voice is untouched in (or even boosted) to clearly distinguish the lines from each other.