Nice submission, you had a cool idea and executed it very well - I'm very happy about you bringing together a glitched synth and distorted drums with basically a soft Fender Rhodes sound, the contrast is really giving me the tinglies in the best way.
I think my biggest hangup is that starting around 1:35 you are running two lines of counterpoint melody on the same instrument and spectrally close to each other over an arpeggiated chord background and a soft bassline. I think I understand the thought: whatever that synth sound is playing is going to be in the foreground, but you wanted to give both melody lines equal presence in the piece - kind of like a "choose your own adventure" melody. I think, it would have worked better if those two lines were a little further apart (no playing in the same octave at the same time) and if they were played by different instruments.
Again, the idea with these highly contrasting instruments is absolutely great and it's one I'll steal for a future project.