The story just isn't for me. It is too slow of a burn, and I have no reason to care about what happens to any of the characters. Their personalities feel shallow and forced, and the "poetry" is nothing more than a head-to-desk moment. This is the first visual novel that made me think about turning on "Skip Unread" to bypass what feels like filler.
I'm going to clarify for the peanut gallery: I don't care about the lack of H-Scenes earlier on. That is NOT relevant.
I wish you luck and success in your work.