I totally understand dw! Im so happy about your confirmation regarding routes and necklace thingy, made me so excited to see more!! About the mc, i was thinking to myself you were probably going for that "looking thru her eyes" kinda thing which is not bad, its actually pretty original compared to some other yandere games i have played! I was just a bittt confused because the "you" aspect and picking your name etc was throwing me off if its supposed to be someone else if yknow what i mean. All in all its refreshing to see that Miles is very attractive, but you kept his "ugly" side. I think alot of people would want to soften/dramatically worsen it but your description was totally natural-flowing if it makes sense. Like despite me being different than MC, i could understand her because Miles did help her so she would feel like she ows him etcetc. (Dont worry about the choices thing, i love when theres few but impactful ones) I enjoyed it very much and loved every second of playing, hence why this is probably my first or second comment in my entire itch.io career haha! I wish you alot of luck, cant wait to see where this goes <33 (ALSO thank you for not taking it negatively, i love your work and would hate if i hurt you in any way, small or otherwise. Keep up the amazing work!!)
Oh it's fine, really! I would never take personally something I can clearly see was not said with bad or hurtful intentions, in fact, this is actually the kind of feedback I desperately need! As a solo dev this being my first project means I have a lot of room for improvement, and there's no one better to teach me how to do it than the players themselves!... quick thing about the MC thing, I guess I was going for something similar to Homicipher, idk if you know that game, but it's also a visual novel with an established MC but the fact that you can name her makes it immersive without dismissing her character, I want a VN that has a main character, but that you can experience without breaking immersion which I have found is very hard to achieve cuz some people will love having an established MC and others will hate not being able to customize it, but hey, I must just accept that I can't meet everyone's expectations and tastes so I just did what I felt the best hehe ...also thank you for all your kind words and big compliments! They are extremely encouraging for me and gives me much more motivation when I see stuff that can be improved! I'll definitely keep in mind everything you've said, thank you!
Ofc, i love your attitude and im glad about your stance! Its true you cant cater to everyone & i now understand exactly what youre going for with the mc so thank you, no problem and if you ever need someone to test your game or give you an honest opinion im your woman! Have a beautiful rest of your day :3