I think that the tempo change with that chugging bass line was a great idea, immediately perked me up! Although to echo some others the end did feel a bit abrupt, but I thought the beginning and transition to more energy was well put together. Very nice job and I think very fitting for an end credits to a game!
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Thank you, like I said in another comment, I was trying to lead into the end by reducing the bass/cello line to just two notes, but that alone did not achieve the intended effect of preparing the listener for the end. I may revisit this piece now that the jam is over (and I have more time on my hands) to put a proper end section on there.