A cool spacy but not space adventure! Lovely written, illustrated and laid out!
I like that the big theme of a wizard trying to do a good thing leading to a bad thing is mirrored in a smaller way by the will-o-wisps! And perhaps this theme is spun even further by the endings, as the players themselves can only do things with good intentions, but questionable outcomes?
Please resolve one little confusion: at the very beginning there is the bridge and in that area description it is sad in a central area live 45 people. Is this meant to be a central settlement in A1, the shambles in A4 or are the NPCs dotted around over all areas?
I’ll put the module unto my todo-list :)