The writing is great and the setting is intriguing and the mystery fascinating, however I may add a small criticism (that may not be one at all considering this is but the start of this story) that there are, quite a lack of choices that actualy impact us, it truly felt like we were strung along by the arm and not given a chance to properly be MC. Though again, this may not even be criticism at all and this may be a feature, there are many MCs out there with set personalities, but even then, I still felt a large lack of choice.
that aside, I,truly enjoyed the plot itself and the idea of the curse