I enjoy the knockoff Jurassic Park: Lost World vibe of the intro :D The locations are interesting and evocative, though I did ended up with a few questions about what was intended for the overall structure of the module:
- What happens if the ritual happens? Does it just happen where the Saurian King is? What exactly is the Saurian King?
- Is it correct that the king corrupting fossils advances the clock, or should it say it sets it back? If it should be set back, given that there are 10 clock segments and 8 locations, and the Saurian King acts is parallel to the party, would it ever be possible to get to 10 segments? It seems like the best strategy would be to find the king and face it head-on.