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A very promising first Demo!

The art, CGs, the menu, and even the UI are very beautiful
The small animation when making a choice is very cute and does make it quite unique.
The character sprites are all very dynamic, and having multiple poses instead of just one makes them more alive.

The music is very nice, so far... I would say the main menu's one is my favorite.

A very lovable cast of characters, that are all unique, and have very fun interactions.
They do feel like good friends (Maybe more for some of them), and it's very enjoyable.
I also enjoy the ideas of anecdotes to further the relationship between characters, hope to see more of them.

For the story, I really like it. I'm curious about what will happen later on. 
It's a strong start, that plays more on the mystery, than just drama.
I won't say more, because I want people to read this VN!

The only things that I did found rather strange, but I'm probably alone on that one is the little ring, when you... Increase someone's bond.

I know that some people may enjoy having the confirmation of a good choice, but... I don't know... You play a VN, to make your own choice, so... having this ring means that, you make a choice you don't hear the ring, so... you just reload your save, and pick the other one, and this time you will get the ring.
I'm probably alone on this thought, so... even if it stays it won't bother me.

Anyways, like I said a very promising beginning! 

I wish you luck for everything!

PS : Okay, so the Lion CEO is the character that spoke the least in this Demo, but he's already my favorite. (I mean... just look at him!)
I know, people would tell you to never date your CEO, but that doesn't mean I'm not going to try! ( Even though... I feel like I already have an idea about who is going to be the main love interest, but I might be wrong!)

Thank you very much for your comment! I had a lot of fun reading your review, and I’m really glad that you’ve been enjoying the novel so far!

Also, regarding the little ring, choosing a certain option doesn’t really affect the story that much, so you don’t have to worry about picking the “wrong” one. (Although there will be some branching choices that can make the story a bit different dedicated for certain someone in the future, they will still ultimately follow the same path.)

When the ring goes off, it means that you’ve either increased a character’s bond, unlocked an anecdote, or triggered a variable that will remember your choice throughout the story.

That feature mainly serves as a bonus for choosing a favorable option for certain characters and will eventually unlock extra content, such as an additional lines and a bonus CG for that character at certain points in the episode. The same goes for unlocking an anecdote. Though, I might change the jingle for unlocking an anecdote and triggering certain variables so that they’re easier to differentiate from each other.

Oh, and I’m glad you find the lion interesting! xD He may have less screen time in this patch, but he’ll get more in the next update~