Love the concept, very much my type of setup, grounded with a layer of existential horror.
What I thought worked well
- Concept is neat , first page hooked me
- Very open and agnostic, can use it for almost any game, like that
- Simple yet with a lot of potential, was already visualising all the chaos in the huge space
What I thought could be improved
- I lacked a bit of the hymn after the first page. It kind of ends there and then it's just rooms and some minor events. Was hoping for outcomes or effects of the hymn at least
- Lacked the sense of a big crowd and ongoing sermon throughout, could have been nice to add some reinforcement because the idea is great
- The text on dark grey is not very accessible and felt hard to read