Art is as good as I'd expect from Chaoclypse (big fan of your art, it may have inspired me to learn to draw...), really evocative stuff, immaculate vibes. (Emerald Cabal giving me Metal Gear Rising memories...)
The layout is easily readable and clear, the factions descriptions are succinct and compelling enough to imply a really interesting and grimy S&S city, I could easily drop this into something like Black Sword Hack or something else with a level of weird grunge.
Great work that really feels like the basis for something special.