Good job on making a game. The jumping w/the coin collection mechanic was fun, Unfortunatley it doesn't fit the theme at all. I understand you're saying it's about the cost of presession in western society but you saying how it fits the theme doesn't show at all in the game and therefore I can't use that as evidence for it. In my opinion it's about you getting your family to a rocketship. Nothing back the theme up, nothing shows what you need to do. There is no risk in the game and that's where it falls short for me. The biggest issue is that there is no reward, once you jump to the next section it says you win, only you. It makes no sense and sadly there was no click in my head.
good job getting the game made, but lets see where you can bring it next!