I love the in medias res beginning and the slow unfurling of the world. The scenario seems to be a quick one and done for a group of paragon, but could be a night of arguments for those groups with differing views on good and bad.
The art direction is all over the place and the module would greatly benefit from a straight line in this regard, but I won’t hold it against this quite complex scenario I will throw some of my players into :)
Thank you! I did want to include multiple factions that had reasons for conflict with eachother, so different groups may decide what they wanted to do once they left the prison. I'd be very intrigued to see what happens when a group is divided on which faction to support; maybe they'll just decide to follow their own interests and oppose them all! I appreciate the comments about the art and layout, I am still in the process of learning about such things, and this time I prioritized the information I thought would be necessary to comfortably run the adventure. I am really glad to know you intend to run this adventure for your players, and I hope everyone has fun with it!
