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WOW. like, wow. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH?

the very first thing piqued my interest is the color used for this VN! a bunch of blue and white with some black. but that single red (or brown? i forgot;;) sweater worn by P.O.E. is so out of place, that made me curious.

who thought a single color so out of place at first made the story climax even more immersive later in the story? i absolutely love how you used the colors!

move on to the characters; oh i love the cutscenes in this VN, so smooth so pretty so cool... i love that cutscene of P.O.E. and Etienne in that one spesific scene (the wall one, iykyk.)

(might be spoilers below, ssoooo go play it before continuing reading!)




genuinely didn't see that twist coming... i mean, i did expect a twist... but NOT that kind of twist... for Etienne actually being such entity and P.O.E.'s real identity... who would've expected? 

well, you. (which is amazing)

concept, very COOL. art and character design, very PRETTY. story and plot, very AMAZING. 10/10 honestly would bang my head to the walls so that i will suffer from amnesia and be able to play this VN again for another first time. 

I'M SO GRATEFUL FOR THIS COMMENT?? THANK YOU A LOT????? i'm really glad you liked my VN, it makes me really happy <3 (i also really like that scene you mention heh....)

regarding the last thing...i DO want to remake it eventually into a more fleshed out VN because i did make this for a game jam in a short time window, so whenever and if i do it, i'd be happy if you gave it a try too !!

(yeah... that scene... very amazing...)

TMI but i saved the file like two or three dialogues before the cutscene. im so glad i did that, literally played that cutscene at least 7 times before continuing the story because it really caught me OFF GUARD (in a good way).

wish i can experience it for the first time again (sigh) (it was made so well!!!) 

i forgot to include this on my original comment but absolutely love the tension between P.O.E. and Etienne... looks innocent on the surface yet you can feel that something isn't right if you read into their conversation a bit deeper... 

this is one of my fav entries for the jam and wow,,, im very excited if Give Me a Break ever get a remake... will wait impatiently patient for that, for now good luck on your next project! <3

THANK YOU! :'D