Heyo! My bf and I played this game around the same time, so some of these thoughts are from him. I figured I might as well just combine our comments together!
Things we liked:
* Characters are very animated and alive!
* The use of real life places as backgrounds we thought was really cute
* The dynamics between Eli and Lila are great and we think they're funny.
Our main constructive comment:
* The writing as a whole feels medyo... magulo. It's a slice of life, except nothing noteworthy really happens. I think you might want to go back to the fundamentals of storytelling. A plot is a series of events, while a story (or fabula) is a series of causally linked events. It means one event is the cause of the next, and so on. The events that take place in this game don't really lead to anywhere. Even the pasalubong-buying (which is most of the story) has no real pay-off because the ending skips in time to... you know.
We hope you take this in good faith. We believe in you, and we think you're capable of improving and being really really good. Be proud of what you've made; congrats on participating and we wish you the best.