Yes, it's a good story for sure! But I would like to see more kinky actions. Panties gag for example - awesome! But why did she took it for so soon? Some breathplay would be greate. More exsibitionism would be greate (like walking home or getting a ride home from one of the patrons, or not exactly home). The most interesting part could start on the next days :)
Most dissapointing part for me that it turned out purely consensual play... But the perfect plot would be start as consensual then get corrupted (not so consensual) down to a plaything for patrons/neighbours/passers...