First impression, it's easy to read! I do like the mechanics (two random encounters??? wow!) to make the adventure not stale, the descriptions of the map feel less...strong? I feel like in a short descriptions, you either have to deliberate on focusing on describing the location (the visuals, vibe) or the people (how they feel) in it. Some paragraphs end the sentences early, you can use that remaining space to put more details! Overall, this was a good entry, the themes are felt! Awesome stuff!