First off, I love the hand-made art.
I would also have not thought to make this title a Pirate Borg adventure and I love the out of the box thinking here. I've been running a ton of published Pirate Borg one-shots at my local gaming store this summer, and this feels more Pirate Borg than even one or two big name publications I've run.
Fantastic cast of characters and great new monsters, all of whom fit into Pirate Borg like a glove.
I know space is a premium in this jam -- I had to cut a page's worth of content in the last 30 minutes before submitting -- but the typeface here is so small it's hard to read on screen and would probably be murder to read on a print-out. I'd find a sentence or two in each paragraph to cut (why do we care if the clay is edible?) and pop the typeface up a font.