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Really focused and interesting drama, really up my alley!


What I think worked well

  • The setup is great and clear from the start
  • The writing is good, easy to read
  • Has laters with a B "plot" that makes things interesting
  • I love how the resolutions are more social

What i think could be improved

  • The styling felt a bit anachronistic, felt it would work a bit better diving into the theme,l; serif, maybe more texture graphics
  • The map while effective felt a bit out of place. Could have been a bit better incorporated into the document
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Thanks for your kind words! I agree the map is a bit out of place and that it could have used more graphics - I think my commitment to making the first page the cover highlighted my weaknesses (layout and verbosity). As far as the anachronistic styling, all I can say is that I was trying to imitate those $2 70s paperbacks I grew up on so as far as I'm concerned that achieved my goals. Anyway, thanks again!

Oh yeah it totally felt 70s. I was getting 1870s vibes 😅