This is so creative and fun the concept alone is already great, but then reading it has so many little touches that make it even better.
What I loved
- The idea of entering a creature means this can appear anywhere and function as a one shot or a side adventure or a main adventure. Also imagine a slug inside a slug.
- The details like the Goblin with the boots, Elgar living inside a cosy hut, it being able to control the slug elevates this further.
- A lot of content for a small package
- Adorable sketches, cutest slug and two anuses!
What I think could be improved
- Although some key elements are bold, some like the hook worms are not, so I lost it when i was scanning
- I would have loved a bit more description on the goblin, since Alara and Elgar get so much
- A few line breaks could have made us a bit easier on the eyes. I know it's though with the limited space though
- Even though it's a lot of content, I wonder if slightly fewer rooms could help with a bit more space to flesh out some of the existing rooms
With that said I thought it was great and definitely going to use it in future! 🐌