以下是Google翻译内容：Hello, I'm here to comment on areas for improvement. First, I hope the descriptions of everyone's virginity can be improved. Second, the attack on the return to town from Sakura Village was simply too much to bear. I hope this chapter can be changed, at least allowing the protagonist to save everything before Shika and Hana are harmed. The emotional relationships described earlier were very delicate, so I absolutely cannot accept this scene; it was like my heart stopped beating.