I'd like to point some things out:
- I noticed the pages were 5 in total? Was this intentional?
- I also noticed the map was snapping to the text, and they were a lot of empty spaces. I could not read some of the sections covered by the map.
That aside, I feel like the overall reading experience could be improved if the text was just slightly shifted to the left, the margins were unequal. I appreciate the description have different formattings. I think the writing has a potential.