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Maps and information are laid out clearly and are easy to follow. Deeply rooted in classic fae and folkloric tropes; reminds me heavily of Dolmenwood (which I enjoy greatly). The text is brutally small at times which is unfortunate for people who like access to analogue materials. This may have been avoided through a combination of utilizing the cover page for more information and/or shortening descriptions. Also, it seems like location 10 could have been written more clearly as it (a) took me a few tries to understand what the situation is and (b) introduces a "half-slice" which seems to disrupt an otherwise straightforward mechanic. The thesaurus of titles to avoid using true names is charming, and I enjoy how each trial requires a different approach on the part of the PCs.  Thank you for sharing your project.

Thank you so much for your review and feedback! To be compared favorably to Dolmenwood is a huge compliment.

I am also someone who prefers analogue materials, so post judgement-period I will look into adjusting the text size. I appreciate that feedback immensely!

Also location 10 is definitely supposed to say "half a clock" rather than half a "slice." I will also be changing that as soon as allowed, hopefully not developing an ulcer in the meantime xD