I like the presentation and writing!
The descriptions of being cooked are fun, but i'd love for there to be more descriptive scenes of the sensations of being eaten. The tension of having an arm or a leg in your boyfriend's mouth; his gaze turning more and more animal as his saliva dribbles out from between his teeth. The scene of looking through the cookbook together on his lap is a great example of this, and really cute to visualize. <3