When I first saw this adventure published, I instantly thought, “damn, I don’t think I can compete with that layout, but I am inspired by it!” I love your colors, your typography, the clever way you’ve integrated a lot of reference info into relatively natural language… super, super cool.
The adventure itself rocks. The images of explorers delving into rolling sulphuric fog are killer, and the Clay Amalgamation’s relationship with the parasite is super interesting and clever. The brimstone curse adds time pressure and diegetic explanation in one stroke, which is the surest sign of good writing. To that end, the only criticisms I have of the module are that I wish it specified a bit more to tie the party in: What exactly is the evidence they find in Crater Luat? And why exactly does destroying the meteor (whatever it is!) wipe out the airborne parasites it spawned? But these questions get me interested, and that’s the true battle. Great stuff, please make more <3