The writing felt uncomfortably real, and I love the subtle dig at certain aspects of white queer culture. The storytelling through the sent and unsent letters was really well done. I like how we go through the letters not in chronological order, but in thematic order, with the single sent letter being the last one we read. The way we get snippets of the characters through time... Lilith's pent-up feelings and self-destructive behavior is very tragic. Really well done character writing.
Also love the way you styled the look of this VN. It looks unique but isn't overblown and also adds a ton to the vibe of the story. Great work!!