Thank you for playing and for the feedback! All your nitpicks are not infact nitpicks but really truly useful! If I fix up the game after the jam ends, I will 100% fix everything you listed as those are real problems. Stuff like the weird music looping and the tutorial unskippibleness we did know about, but at that point we had like an hour until submissions closed so we couldn't fix it in time. You're right in that the book thing is annoying, we considered making it just open the book to the last page.... buuuut I was tired of animating and I was too lazy to redo the opening animation with generic text instead of page 1 text, whoops!
Anyway I'm suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper glad you loved the voice acting!!! That really is the meat of this game and I'm happy that everyone's been liking it. I'll let the guy who did the warzone call that you liked his work, it was all adlibbed on the spot. (he actually swore a lot in the original audio, we censored it with explosions lol)
Also don't feel bad about writing down phone numbers. I completely miscalculated the amount of time that you needed to play and finish just in time by like 30 minutes, but me five days ago thought 10 minute cup noodles was already too unrealistic (in hindsight, nobody cares, don't kill your games with realism!) And what I'm getting from everyone is that I should've given even more time than just 30 minutes lol.
Sadly, I probably won't go further than bugfixing with this game, because I have better games to make, but if you like what you see, I am going to post a reveal trailer for something in the works very dialogue driven, so follow if you're interested I guess. Sorry for shelling as hard as Mark Brown in my game lol.
Anyways thank you for playing and I'm glad you enjoyed our game!