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Hey Nostr0! It's CookieJar from the GMTK discord. I like your game! It feels very polished for something made in a jam. I particularly like, for example, the achievements, the red shaking timer when time is close-by, god even the way the music speeds up? Really good attention to detail for a seemingly simple game! Just a few comments:

* Perhaps you should consider choosing a more representative cover for your game. The game made me expect that I was gonna play as some sort of space sheriff? Because the purple person in the cover looked like a sheriff to me, idk.

* This game will benefit from having more variety! Maybe some special kinds of trash (lol?) that needs different ways to be picked up. Or other level layouts that force players to not stay so close to the trash-selling machine, for example, to encourage constant movement. It also emphasizes the time limit and makes going fast even more interesting! :>


That's all. Great game! Congrats on submitting for the jam, and I wish you the best!

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Hey CookieJar, thanks for the comprehensive review and for playing my game! 

The last few games I've made either didn't come to completion at all due to scope creep or wasn't finished at all. This time I've decided to make a relatively polished game and I think I somewhat succeeded in that. 

The cover was made within an hour, and sadly I didn't really know how to make a better one, but I will try to improve for the next jam! Probably a mop in the picture would have helped :D

I also thought about "special" trash that gives more money or events that can happen, but there was simply not enough time for that. 

The map layout is sadly very simple due to it being randomly generated on runtime and I didn't have enough time to make a more complex room/map generator.

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Hey, here's something you can note for future game jams: you can change anything outside of the game after the deadline! This includes the cover and itch page and whatnot. I actually made my cover a day after the deadline for this jam xD. Did me wonders! 


I hope your submission does well and I wish you the best for your future endeavors!

Oh I didn't know that was allowed :O