Cool idea. You added a shocking amount of juice for a text-based game, which I really enjoyed. Solid art (and some fun cameos--was not expecting Rambo haha). One criticism I have is that the text appeared realllly slowly, which was frustrating for me. I wanted to dig into figuring out what systems were in play in the game, not wait for the text to finish typing. The writing quality was good, though. Good work!