What a creative take on the theme! Extremely meta which I love, a game after my own heart so to speak!
Voice acting is always fun! You did a great job as the narrator. I felt there was quite some delay between the things happening and the narrator describing them, like the events and narrations are added into a queue and doesn't interrupt the previous voice lines.
I appreciate the satire too! I've been part of a great many game jams, and visual novels and stuff shooting at you really is popular and they are pushed in every game. I thought I saw you mention in the Discord that this was your first game jam? Keep at it man, this is sick! If you can't make an amazingly polished game, you make an interesting or funny game. This is actually decently polished and interesting and funny! The trifecta. Keep jammin!