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I think Ive finished the game. There is a bug stopping me from finishing it, but I checked the game files and I think I saw nearly everything.

 After all this is incredibly promising game. All the characters are absolutely amazing, in my opinion maybe even the best of all visial novels Ive played, I really love them. All the dialogues are quite good too. The plot is really nice too, overall very very good for the first demo.

Now for the bugs Ive found: firstly the bag that I described earlier that stopped me from finishing the game. Also Ive found quite annoying bug: the game says that I have 25 energy, that means that I can perform an action, but if I select one the game puts me to sleep, because Im too tired. So everyday day you can only do 3 things instead of 4. There also was bug in Meggie and two other girls feeding scenes. Ren py shows an error but you can just ignore it and continue.

What things I offer: first and most important is stats menu of girls. That really makes the game more interesting because you can see their progress throughout the game. I love the idea of seeing total weight their gained, but if you add the images that would be fire. Also it would be nice if you add another measurment system: kilos and centimetres. Maybe you can also add new foods in future. You can cook them when your cooking skills reach new level or smth like this. 

In the end I want to say that I really enjoyed playing the game and Im really looking forward to the newer versions. I would love to see the girls gain even more weight and new stages and events. Thanks for all the work youve done, the game is really cool. I wish you luck with making later versions and improving the game! 

Thats probably all that I wanted to say, if I will remember anything else I will edit this message.

P.s: sorry if I explained something not very clearly. English is not my native language so Im trying my best. If anything is not clearly explained I will answer any questioms with pleasure!

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I love this explanation and I really appreciate your feedback. To address your first big can you send me a screenshot, I’m pretty sure that happened because of my limited coding skills but I will definitely fix it. As far as the Maggie and the feeding scenes I would need to see a screenshot on that one as well. I remember this one giving me a lot of trouble before as I thought I fixed it but I have not. With your idea of cooking new foods I absolutely love that idea and will highly consider it, this game has taken me a whole year to work on and I’m doing it solo as I am also learning to coding aspect of it so I was limited on resources such as assets and skills. As far as the measurements  planning on overhauling the entire thing as the current stat sheet is just a placeholder until I can find someone who knows how to make a stat sheet and custom up in renpy so I will have kilos and centimeters. Thank you so much for your feedback.  

So bug with Su Jin scene, I dont really know what to senf you, I will try to explain again. Su Jin event in the nightclub repeats everytime you go there, stopping you from working. If i figure out how to link a video or smth I will send it. Same with the energy bug. With the Maggie bug I will figure out how to upload screenshot, because right now I can upload only a bit of it, idk why. Ill figure that out and send you screenshots as soon as I can.

ok I know what you're talking about sorry for the long response time I'm going to look at the code and see if i cant fix it for you my bad. as far as the energy bug I think that was lack of coding experience from my part as I made that part of the code almost a year ago I will review and make sure it's better for you thank you for your feedback

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if Im correct is this the event when she tells you she wants to become your feedee? If so I think I've just fixed it. I'm working on the energy bug and the maggie one now.

Take your time, its alright. About the event bug, yeah, I think thats the one I was talking about, I think Ill redownload the game when I have time and check it. Thanks for fixing the bugs, great reaction time! (sorry if it sounds strange)

I'll let you know when i put up the new fix 

So I uploaded an 1.01 fix I couldn't fix the energy bug just yet but the su jin event should be fixed as far as the maggie event if it happens again take a screenshot but i wanted to at least get something out so you could finish the game. I think your previous save should work sorry for any inconvenience I'm still learning how to use renpy and code. 

Thanks bro! Energy bug is not that important anyways. Thanks though for fixing su jin bug, I think I will download the game tommorow, cause its currently late night in my country. If smth Ill take a screenshot. If anything Ill let you know. Also speaking of energy bug, I also remember that making food for Gresha takes 50 energy, maybe its how it should be, maybe not, just letting you know. Thanks again for fixing the bug, Ill write review on it later)

Thank you very much and no problem,. Knowing my dumbass I probably just made a mistake lol.

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Oh and also. As I understand you downloaded a demo of your another game on google drive by mistake. Can I download it or play it somewhere? Im interested in trying it if you need review or smth

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Yeah I will say it’s not a fetish based game more of a story written game but here’s the link  I would love your feedback if you want me to continue making updating the game 

https://mafioso1724.itch.io/dragons-veil