Awesome review, thanks for the feedback!
Glad at least one other person found the joke of the exact same scene playing funny.
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The first time I saw it I was like "ah they mistimed that okay, not too big of a bug but surprised they didn't catch it", and then the second playthrough just cut in after a moment of awkward silence.
I think to make it really land, having a record-scratch play at the interruption would make it clear it was intentional, and cutting the crickets-chirping for the end bit. Just have the camera awkwardly hold on the body for juuust too long, before swapping back to the intro again.
Humour in games and in general is very subjective, and I can see the vision you were going for there.