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Rewrite is shaping up to be pretty great so far!

Just one thing kinda surprises me  (spoilers beware)





When we save Ruolan after she eats the beast core, there wasn't any really emotional option, like we couldn't cry, or even hug her! Which I thought was a bit weird considering she nearly died and we barely saved her. I was honestly more emotional than my character, who has a high emotional stat!

So in short, I was kinda expecting a more emotional option after saving Ruolan, I don't always want to be super mature!

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Perhaps the MC was just totally overwhelmed by everything, leaving them completely blank. They literally mentioned feeling so mentally exhausted, and you can just feel how spent they are!

As someone said the MC was already overwhelmed by everything and this wasn't the first time Ruolan's luck had gotten herself into this kind of situation. But still, I added a new choice to express your emotions more throughly now.

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Awesome! I really appreciate the effort you're putting into this!

Edit: just went back and played through it, and that was pretty much the exact thing I wanted, tysm!

You are most welcome!!