I'm not a visual novel guy, but this has something I really like that is uncommon in jams: it feels very personal. Between the drawings, the photos (I love mixed media like this), and what I assume is you playing the guitar it feels like it's entirely personal. And of course the narrative.
Again, I don't know much about visual novels but I really like how it's written. It feels both mundane, depressing and happy at the same time, which is a good thing. I hope you can make more stuff like this in the future.
As a note, I got the ending 2/5 and 3/5, so not very good lol.
(and if the narrative is also that personal, I hope you are doing ok OP)